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27/07/2009
捣练子
捣练子
幽岭静
海无烟
策马山间紧纵鞭
白眼熙尘名利客
云穿坞入衍华年
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虽是单位50周年征文的应酬之作，但水准还是相当高的（羞涩状…）
优点：
1、一收一放，节奏感很强
2、、切题！相当的切题~
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羞涩状…）
